You're almost there! While your application is mostly acceptable, there are still a few areas where tweaking is needed.
» We noticed that you have forgotten to give Charon a passive power that ties in with his wish. » We would like a bit more elaboration on how his power allows him to break free of bonds. Would it grant him a sudden, inexplicable burst of strength when his freedom is threatened? Would it also give him lockpicking capabilities?
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You're almost there! While your application is mostly acceptable, there are still a few areas where tweaking is needed.
» We noticed that you have forgotten to give Charon a passive power that ties in with his wish.
» We would like a bit more elaboration on how his power allows him to break free of bonds. Would it grant him a sudden, inexplicable burst of strength when his freedom is threatened? Would it also give him lockpicking capabilities?
You have 72 hours to get back to us with the necessary revisions, or your application will be rejected.