You're almost there! While your application is mostly acceptable, there are still a few areas where tweaking is needed.
» While your Personality section is fine, we would like to see it expanded a bit due to her importance as a prominent character in the canon that this game was based off of. » We would like either a more clear explanation of how her wish would be granted or a reworked Wish section. » We noticed that you have not given Madoka a passive power that ties into her wish and would like you to do that.
You have 72 hours to get back to us with the necessary revisions, or your application will be rejected.
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You're almost there! While your application is mostly acceptable, there are still a few areas where tweaking is needed.
» While your Personality section is fine, we would like to see it expanded a bit due to her importance as a prominent character in the canon that this game was based off of.
» We would like either a more clear explanation of how her wish would be granted or a reworked Wish section.
» We noticed that you have not given Madoka a passive power that ties into her wish and would like you to do that.
You have 72 hours to get back to us with the necessary revisions, or your application will be rejected.