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» We would like to see a second sample that shows off more of Murasakibara's voice and inner thoughts. » We would like to see further expansion on the Wish section, as it doesn't match up to his characterization at this canon point. » The active power does not relate to his wish.
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You're almost there! While your application is mostly acceptable, there are still a few areas where tweaking is needed.
» We would like to see a second sample that shows off more of Murasakibara's voice and inner thoughts.
» We would like to see further expansion on the Wish section, as it doesn't match up to his characterization at this canon point.
» The active power does not relate to his wish.
You have 72 hours to get back to us with the necessary revisions, or your application will be rejected.