You're almost there! While your application is mostly acceptable, there are still a few areas where tweaking is needed.
» We would like to see an expanded Wish section that explains the thoughts and feelings behind her wish. » The active power you have chosen allows her weapon to have unlimited ammo. This, in addition to the fact that they automatically hone in on enemies, makes it too versatile in a way that is overpowered for a base power. We would like to see this adjusted. We would also like to see more clarification on the size and power of the explosions. » As a note, we feel that the "wayfinder" portion of Aqua's passive power would work better as a power upgrade, to be regained at a later date.
You have 72 hours to get back to us with the necessary revisions, or your application will be rejected.
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You're almost there! While your application is mostly acceptable, there are still a few areas where tweaking is needed.
» We would like to see an expanded Wish section that explains the thoughts and feelings behind her wish.
» The active power you have chosen allows her weapon to have unlimited ammo. This, in addition to the fact that they automatically hone in on enemies, makes it too versatile in a way that is overpowered for a base power. We would like to see this adjusted. We would also like to see more clarification on the size and power of the explosions.
» As a note, we feel that the "wayfinder" portion of Aqua's passive power would work better as a power upgrade, to be regained at a later date.
You have 72 hours to get back to us with the necessary revisions, or your application will be rejected.