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ยป We would like more elaboration on how her abilities relate back to her wish. Although a connection may be inferred, we ask that all applications include an explicit explanation for the sake of clarity and so that no mistake can be made.
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You're almost there! While your application is mostly acceptable, there are still a few areas where tweaking is needed.
ยป We would like more elaboration on how her abilities relate back to her wish. Although a connection may be inferred, we ask that all applications include an explicit explanation for the sake of clarity and so that no mistake can be made.
You have 72 hours to get back to us with the necessary revisions, or your application will be rejected.